Thursday, October 15, 2009

Under 30 Sec.

so heres the thing, about my life,
theres not much adrenaline, poise, nor strife,
I go to school, make shirts all day
and here I am to tell you...Hey!

Not much I know but its all I've got
my spirits strung on shirts and not
so much into this poetry now
but heres one more and I say Ciao.

Yes, I did write this under 30 seconds right off the top of my head. Hold your applause. But feel free to comment.

2 comments:

  1. Wow, Ed. I am very impressed! It definitely satisfied my want for another peom :) Good Work

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  2. Impressive. I'm sorry, i couldn't retain my applause, it just slipped out.

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